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Some more f18 rephrasings

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@@ -6,8 +6,8 @@ quite clear to either of us whether what had happened to them. They
 might have been conscious, attempting to communicate complex ideas to
 might have been conscious, attempting to communicate complex ideas to
 us in a geometric, spatiotemporal language, layering meaning upon meaning
 us in a geometric, spatiotemporal language, layering meaning upon meaning
 like a semiotic braid of fine silk, stitching together morphemes and
 like a semiotic braid of fine silk, stitching together morphemes and
-embroidering lexemes. Or they might just have gotten cut somehow. It was
-kind of windy, really, now that I paid attention to it.
+embroidering lexemes. Or they might just have gotten cut or something. It
+was kind of windy, really, now that I paid attention to it.
 
 
 "Look," I said. "I came here to rent a movie, and I'm gonna rent a
 "Look," I said. "I came here to rent a movie, and I'm gonna rent a
 movie, dammit. Do you want to rent a movie?"
 movie, dammit. Do you want to rent a movie?"
@@ -35,4 +35,4 @@ ontological impossibility to describe of existing there at all."
 "Fair enough," I said, and grabbed the box of an 80's action classic,
 "Fair enough," I said, and grabbed the box of an 80's action classic,
 the plastic tape inside rattling as I took it from the rack.
 the plastic tape inside rattling as I took it from the rack.
 It later turned out the clothes wanted a romcom, but we really
 It later turned out the clothes wanted a romcom, but we really
-had no idea of knowing that at the time.
+had no way of knowing that at the time.