Some more f18 rephrasings

works/fascicles/018-fytte-the-eighteenth/text

@@ -6,8 +6,8 @@ quite clear to either of us whether what had happened to them. They
 might have been conscious, attempting to communicate complex ideas to
 us in a geometric, spatiotemporal language, layering meaning upon meaning
 like a semiotic braid of fine silk, stitching together morphemes and
-embroidering lexemes. Or they might just have gotten cut somehow. It was
-kind of windy, really, now that I paid attention to it.
+embroidering lexemes. Or they might just have gotten cut or something. It
+was kind of windy, really, now that I paid attention to it.
 
 "Look," I said. "I came here to rent a movie, and I'm gonna rent a
 movie, dammit. Do you want to rent a movie?"
@@ -35,4 +35,4 @@ ontological impossibility to describe of existing there at all."
 "Fair enough," I said, and grabbed the box of an 80's action classic,
 the plastic tape inside rattling as I took it from the rack.
 It later turned out the clothes wanted a romcom, but we really
-had no idea of knowing that at the time.
+had no way of knowing that at the time.